28 Jul 2012 03:05
I never could finish this. It's supposed to be about escalation.
Within the walls of a mighty hall
...And thats where I crapped out. Any suggestions?
28 Jul 2012 03:09
umm i'm not that good person in suggestion but in somehow i liked the tune of the poem ..
28 Jul 2012 03:25
I think it was the rythym of it that got me started.
28 Jul 2012 03:34
poem words ..
it's a basic role which is behind each poem there is a story .. Maybe the story something you felt , something you saw , something burned or hurted u inside producing the words in a poem ..