TopicsBoard archive Poems: August 2008: Love Gain Love Lost

Je suis Canadienne.

Il ne devrait pas être important si vous êtes ou pas, as devrait être gentil et ne pas diss votre poésie

Warm-blooded. This is a really good one. While it can use a few finishing touches to beautify the long-verse, I don't fully agree with your philosophical interpretation of love & hate.

While I do believe that hatred can be the energy that pushes us to be the best to our ability, I do not believe that this applies to everyone. We interpret love & hate in our own way when it comes to our feelings. Ultimately, we choose what emotional fuel is used to push us into being at our best. I do not think this fuel is not limited to hate.

I think this missing point would empower your material into a memorable milestone. Nonetheless, keep up the good work.

Thankk u i doo agree with u along thoughs points
and i respect your veiw and thank you for ur commment

I hope you have the courage to share more of your work here.

thaz fantastic.the poem depicts a high creativity level and it sounds more original